aww ...that is very sad, and i really relate to it. keep up the great work you have a talent :)

I can relate! I love it! you have indeed great talent! 5/5! Keep it up the good work!
I hope tah read more!

i love the style! excellent work, this is true talent!

good poem not your best but still good, you probably could have made it a bit longer and had a better ending, but I still loved it.
-Rhode Island is a great place my whole family still lives there just not me :( I went up for a vacation my freshman year of high school though, I miss it already.

OMG another brilliant poem, your so good!!! take care xx