wow...that was beautiful..very sad. i hope that you continue to write..you have a talent

wow. i loved this poem, it was so well written, keep up the amazing work

~ lovely write
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

i loved this i loved this this is gr8,well writen everything about,i could imagine myself holding the one i love for the last time in this very way,woowwww i loved this

Stunning,.. i love these type of poems that flow so easily,.. and its especially cool that there really wasnt a specific rhyme scheme(that i noticed), yet it had a definite rhythm.. great poem5/5,.. thanx for ur comment on mine,..