Comments : No Longer Pure

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    I feel your frustration in this poem.....It´s really good, I love your wording!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku! xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    :( Bumweeeeeeeeeeed! :(

    I had no idea. I'm such a fruit cake I'm so sorry, I love you! I know It's so easy for me to say, but you are stronger than this, I know you are. I believe in you.

    'Please please leave
    I wish you’d stay
    Don’t turn your back
    Just go away'

    So many people feel like this hun, I do too. Feeling that you need help, but don't want to be a burden. Feeling like you need someone, but you'd rather be left on your own. I could go on, but I'm just so shocked. :(

    Hun, I don't know what to say. I really do care about you ya know, you're the only one who's ever really tried to help. I really appreciate everything you've done for me. And for putting up with my rambling which I've so cleverly managed to incorporate in this comment but anyway..

    Take GOOD care of yourself hun, I'm always here, always. Don't forget that.
    Always in my thoughts.
    ALL my love,
    Agather.
    xXx

    I've never seen you write anything like this :( I love it, but I hate it because It's come from you.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    I think that last bit should've come before I said my ending bit, but I'm a spoon so I changed it around. Heh.

  • 19 years ago

    by Oliver Stevenson

    Hun, I'm sorry you feel like this, i wish i could help, you know i will be there for anything, i will stand by you through thick and thin, i promise, i love you hun xxxxxxxx 5/5 :) xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku every1, i dont know wot id do without you guys xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by deadnalone

    thats amazing, fab, dont have the words to describe it, im sitting in a stunned sort of understanding thing, cant explain lol,
    take care,
    much love and much hugs,
    ellie
    xoxoxox

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    thanku so much xx

  • 19 years ago

    by ?

    Another sad but beautiful poem, my favourite lines were...
    'Don’t try to help
    It’ll be in vain
    There is no cure
    For endless pain'
    They just seem to fit perfectly, keep it up xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku hun! x

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    .....

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    thanks hun x