by Heather M Craig Feb 22, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Perilous Stranger |
It was good. Keep writing. It was more than interesting it was astonishing. |
by Mexxy
gj luved it 5/5 |
by bluehun
sheer class,great poem,you have a talent there gal,u really do.keep strong,keep smiling,keep writing cuzzz i`ll keep reading for sure.T/C |
Foul infatualtion...yes. Unrealistic expectations..... to him they aren't. Who is t say what is real and unreal in the mind of someone who is mentally disrturbed... Great job, and if this poem comes accross as confusing to anyone, they need to either: A. Get an imagination. Or B. Go back to school and get some reading comprehension skills, such as context clues and vocabulary lessons. |
Wow..I luv the way this was wrote, such a good choice of words and its just really awesome! |