Very intriguing! I like the mystery~Holly

great poem

wow...i love it! amazing writing! i dont think its too confusing...i kinda like to be creative on what its about hehe. but still this poem is excellent!

Wow..I luv the way this was wrote, such a good choice of words and its just really awesome!
'Deranged Mind
Piceous Heart
From Your Depart.
Crazed Killer,
Foul Infatuation,
Figment Of Imagination.'
I really like that part, and by the way I like the title you picked for this, made me interested in reading the poem!:o) Great work once again! Keep it up..5outta5 for sure!;o)
Shannon

Foul infatualtion...yes. Unrealistic expectations..... to him they aren't. Who is t say what is real and unreal in the mind of someone who is mentally disrturbed... Great job, and if this poem comes accross as confusing to anyone, they need to either: A. Get an imagination. Or B. Go back to school and get some reading comprehension skills, such as context clues and vocabulary lessons.
"Peace on the floor not on your shoes"
Baphomet

sheer class,great poem,you have a talent there gal,u really do.keep strong,keep smiling,keep writing cuzzz i`ll keep reading for sure.T/C

gj luved it 5/5

It was good. Keep writing. It was more than interesting it was astonishing.