by Carmen Feb 22, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
Before I had a friend, |
by Jesse Ray
Powerful poem. Made your point crystal clear. And also I loved the way you canceled the actions from the first half of the poem with: |
by nightschild
Another excellent poem! |
by Britney
This is my favorite poem that i have read of yours so far.. it was very sweet of you to do that for your friend and im glad see met such a good friend like you great job 10/5 lol xox take care x0x |
Yeah, friends are the best...I enoyed your poem. |
by Jamie
This is cool because you put yourself in somebodies shoes and wrote a really emotional piece about it. great job the flow wasn't bad..good job |