Good job!

I REALLY LOVE HAPPY ENDINGS 5

Isnt it great how a friend can make you feel like you are needed... great poem...xox Sherrie

Very nice.It had a good flow.

you did well. keep writing

Most of the rhymes aren't very flowing...Some of them are good. The poem's like a piece of coal being compacted...Someday it will be a diamond, with the right work it will gleam...But for now it's just fuel for the fire.

Aww. This poem made me smile. I’m sure quite a few can relate to it which is always a bonus with poetry. It has a nice ending as well. Please write more ones like this that make people smile.

this poem was good...awesome job

It had kind of an uneven flow but that's ok in the end. I like this one cause it shows that without atleast one good friend you won't get anywhere in life. Good job. 5/5 kilman

it shows the importnce of friendship in someones life how they can make a huge impact on your feelings and thoughts and how they can change someone. it had a great message but it was a little weak in areas, keep working!

~PLP~ lil slam~ thanks for the comment~

This is cool because you put yourself in somebodies shoes and wrote a really emotional piece about it. great job the flow wasn't bad..good job

Yeah, friends are the best...I enoyed your poem.

This is my favorite poem that i have read of yours so far.. it was very sweet of you to do that for your friend and im glad see met such a good friend like you great job 10/5 lol xox take care x0x

Another excellent poem!
your friend must be lucky to have someone who cares about her that much! :D
well done
~*MaRy*~

Powerful poem. Made your point crystal clear. And also I loved the way you canceled the actions from the first half of the poem with:

"So I no longer mope,
I no longer sigh,
I no longer cry,
I no longer moan,
I'm no longer alone."

And still made it rhyme. Once again, very powerful.