One Last Cut

I wrote this poem awhile ago and I never submitted it..I dunno why. Can you guys vote and comment please? thanks

The walls are closing in
And I can't get out
It doesn't matter how loud
I try to scream and shout

Because no one can hear me
And no one cares
No one can see my pain
That always is lingering there

No one understands
Exactly the way I feel
My life is like a movie
Nothing seems real

I cut to know I'm still alive
I cut to know I'm there
I cut because I want to
I cut because I don't care

My life is like a sweater
And it's starting to fray
I want to end this life
So my pain will go away

I can't handle it anymore
Life is just too rough
I can't stay here any longer
I'm just not strong enough

One more cut
And I'll be done
My life is stopping
And I can't run

I can't run away
From my problems anymore
It's too much of a hassle
It's one huge chore

One more cut
Will end my life
It'll end my pain and suffering
It'll end all this strife.

Rachel Crombie--2//22//05