Comments : Fallen

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    damn straight girl! there is an ending to everything in this world, it's best to just love and depend on yourself but love the ones that step into your heart...God bless you and damn it girl, i'm lovin the profile :D big smiles!! i love ya chick!

    love Heather.

  • 19 years ago

    by :( sydney ):

    awesome poem. i love it. you're writing is so great... i'm trying to find a poem to describe what happened between me and my friend...because i can't figure out how to write about it... well anyways...love your writing..
    much love,
    sydney

  • 19 years ago

    by JJ

    Great job! I loved it..keep up the good work
    -J-

  • 19 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    wow i lvd it xxxxxxxxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Victoria

    Amazing poem it really sums up a broken friendship!!

    take care

  • 19 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    Absolutely beautiful. I fell in love with your last stanza:

    We are now like broken glass
    Something that will never mend
    Like raindrops falling to the ground
    Everything has its end

    Very well done.
    -A