wow...omg...amazing poem! this is...wow awesome! wonderful job...

God this is so freaking sad girl ... I wuffuuls you <<33. I hope you are okay, and i'm always here.

;;--Kalah
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WOW .... i rele like thiss ! =]

Omg did that really happen to you?! If that did that would be an unbearable pain. I just hope you never had to go through that. Great poem though. comment and rate. *~dont lose hope there's always a spark left to light the fire*~ >3jess

I'm defidently adding you to my favorites. Love so many of your poems. Keep up the excellent work! >3jess

Nobody should have to go through something like that, but to come through the other side and write a poem? AMAZING, another sad one :(
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Ow...I can feel the pain in my legs...so detailed. It was like i could see the scene playing in front of me...5/5. I LOVE YO WORK, LIL SLAM!!!!!!! Thanks for the comment on "Sick". Yeah, I'll admit, i didn't do that well on it, but thanx anyway! Catchya l8r Lil Slam! Peace+Much Luv+ Blessinz=//Ari\\

Excellent job! Very touching. wow..I'm very sorry about what happened..no one should ever go throught that..beautiful job tho. Read my poems sometime too!

Rachel

How does one express the pain and empathy this poem provokes? I'm very sorry about this.

We grow stronger through the pain we defeat.

What a poem sad sad life it made me cry

Good poem but so sad

I give you my love girl, you need it.

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Omg i cried with this poem good job