excellent poem!

Very mysterious...unique! I liked it~Holly

I love this. This is beautiful, i wanted to add in more lines than this but then i would have to have added the whole piece,
"Calling out to nothing, for nothing becomes it all
Fading inside insanity, a room with white padded walls
You Watched Me Fall"
I love how you portrayed the emotion in those lines. Throughout the whole piece, i love how you displayed your will to fight and the time that is not your own. I also admired how you displayed the hate towards the one responsible, and how you fougt with words like, "i will not cry" and "its not my time" Beautifull done, great job