When did I ever betray you?

by Dondrey   Feb 23, 2005


You betrayed me like no other
You lied about me to another
You made up shit and assumed it would be true
But now you see, that it wasn’t me

You ruined our friendship just for her
You got me in trouble to get closer to her
You lied like always
You will never change
I hope one day Some one will do the same

I never did anything to u
For you to betray me
Like you have
all I ever tried to do was just get back with you
To me that’s no crime but u will see in time
That you need me here
That you need me oh so near

You said you loved me but it was all a lie
A cover up just to keep me alive at night
Now I sit and cry as our friendship is through
How can I trust u
When did I ever betray you?

Ok thiss is my first poem and i know its probley really bad but i got to start somewhere
Plz comment and help me with my writing

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  • 15 years ago

    by Siglawoo

    Really nice poem.... but try to avoid using vulgar words like sh*t etc.... there are some more decent words that show anger and hate

    :)

  • 19 years ago

    by medicine:)ma

    your poem iz good okay 5/5 oh n da fact dat we all start somewhere is very tru