Comments : UnCorrupt Me

  • 19 years ago

    by gasping for air

    this isnt one of ur best... im not sure why... maybe its just not my style poem... but it doesnt do anything for me... and im only one person.. so dont take anything i take too seriously... it just doesnt have a lot of emotion in it... its like you've reserved/checked your feelings out of the poem...
    keep up the great work tho
    much love
    amanda