Your eyes glittered in the misty nights sky
i stand there in front of you as the clouds pass by
and your finger tips
slowly cross my lips
you close your eyes and lean in
your kiss pierce my skin like a razor sharp pin
your arms find there way to surround me
your hugs so tight i cant even think to see
its like a message you send
i never want it to end
and for 11 months i spent with you
every moment was so bran new
but time faded away
and we grew further every day
till one day you stopped talking to me
and i wanted to disappear into the midnight sea
i told you that our relationship was over
you were not longer my lucky clover/
my summer turned out to be great
me and Amanda were staying out late
having fun by the ocean
going with every flow and motion
i never thought about you at all
it was like there was a wall
all memory's of you were lost
like a crumpled ball that i have tossed/
but suddenly i remember you again
and the thought of you is driving me insane
i never thought that i could care so much
of this guy, of soft skin, i got to touch
and it is hurting me so badly
i didn't know i needed you so madly
and i remember now, why i love you so
i just thought, i would let you know
your poem is cute..i like it...how u descibed the way u felt...n didn't use words like scared...sad happy..... i liked how u used pierced..2 describe a feeling u felt..that i liked alot
