by sarah Feb 23, 2005
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
I went on a train and poked a man |
by Simon Hayes
Great stuff... It was so unpredictable, the subject of the poem was so unclear until the last few lines (I like that ;) ). Everyone can relate to this too. Everyone judges, even when not meaning to. It flows nicely, it is written nicely and shows real compassion. I'm very impressed with your work! |
by Dorotea©
wow, very good poem. I like the idea of the poem, about judging a man and then finding out he's a believer and then he becomes your role model. Very very good, 5/5. |
by Anne Conner
Excellent poem. God is good isn't He! |