that poems really good, i like it it's sad but its good..i hope you feel better

Christina

Very touching It pulled at my heart strings 5/5
Dave......

~ nice write, this one too. good job, enjoyed
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

the ending was perfect, you need NO CHANGES hun, absolute perfection!-5

love ya and BIG HUGS
-Heather M Craig

This is really good... really true... dont we all wish we could have our own way...Love Sherrie

Good Job Gurl! <3 Your writin! Keep it up! 100/5 ;)

i thought that was just so cute! great job! <333

heylove the poem... i think its good as it is though... like everyoone said.. the flows great... and yeah

Beautifully written as always Holly, I love your work. Love, Tim