Comments : Temptation Succeeds

  • 19 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    i love it you are a very great poet keep writing

  • 19 years ago

    by Priscilla

    yes i can relate to it. this happeneds very often to me. i can't stand the pain anymore..i just wanna take the knife and kill myself.well anyways no one cares so bye
    ps.good poems!!!!!!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    What a wonderful write .. Yet saddening and heart-wrenching. I loved it ... You are deffinatley one for my favs :D

    This poem is excellent - Just like you!

    ;;--Kalah <3

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Loved ur poem u r very good! Take a look at mine I haven't wrote much so I am not very good. Ur exellent.

  • 19 years ago

    by Cierra

    well something that would happen to me

  • 19 years ago

    by «-Pale-Petals-»

    you wrote this poem so well. It wus deep and sad.. you chose the right words and it came out so well. Im sorry to hear that this happend to you yesterday. I can certainly relate and ive been there like many others have. 5/5
    Samz]]

  • 19 years ago

    by «-Pale-Petals-»

    you wrote this poem so well. It wus deep and sad.. you chose the right words and it came out so well. Im sorry to hear that this happend to you yesterday. I can certainly relate and ive been there like many others have. 5/5
    Samz]]

  • 18 years ago

    by faith

    Wow this poem is real deep...your an amazing writer..keep it up and i hope that everything gets better for you.. though i do understand were you r coming from w/ the whole cutting "issue" ive done it for the past 5 yrs of my life my arms have honestly turned into one big scar .. but ive finally gotten passed it and i havent had to resort to it for 4 months now...and hopefully you will too...if you ever need to talk or watever just send me a message ok...and again that was a bad ass poem..