whoa....excellent poem!

great poem!! keep it up!! :)

Though I will never understand massicism (cutting), it's still a great poem... you have rhythm, good job

I loved this one as well. It had great emotion and rhythem. Keep it up!

This poem was very good, it flowed very nicely. The only thing is that the topic is cliche and there are so many other poems out there like it, there are so many people that cut not that I know, and I no longer get very emotional when I read about them. Keep writing! You'll be an excellent writer when you broaden your horizons!

really liked ur poem keep up the good work!

Another really well written poem. i have added you to my favs. feel free to do the same. You are an awesome writer. love Emma xxx