Comments : Personal Hell

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    wow...amazing poem! it really gives me alot to think about...especially the last stanza...i never thought about that but i guess your right...very good poem!

  • 19 years ago

    by ღ.:Krissy:.ღ

    Nice job Christina! Really liked it! (",)

    ~Krissy

  • 19 years ago

    by CareBear

    HeYa,
    NiCe WoRk ThErE GiiRl, I LoVe iiT!!~
    KeEp iiT uP!!~
    KeEp sMiiLiiNg No MaTtEr WaT!!~
    MwAhZ!!~

  • 19 years ago

    by pinkalias

    I like how you displayed the cover you put on to hide unwanted emotions and turmoils. I also liked how you added the common knowledge between people with these emotions, and that people are not alone in these feelings. I can really, really relate to these lines,
    "Hide your pain for the next day
    Wipe away each tear
    Apply some make-up to cover up
    Just like you have the past year

    Pull down your sleeve
    So no one can see the scars
    Made each night from sorrow
    When everyone is so very far"
    Nice job