hey baby i like this poem but it scared me when u sent it me because it sounded like u were just ready to give up hope. i love u honey and dont ever feel like no one cares for u because i always will. that will never change.

you write really well, short but to the point, just how i like them. 5 xx

thx 4 ur comment and dont give up on life

When I was locked up I lost my baby gurl, I didn't think I could make it. I wanted more then anything for the pain to stop. I stayed strong and we got back toget her.

hey baby its me again. just want to say hi and that i love you! talk to u later.

thats so sad hun.......great poem though, keep your head up.....i know how it feels to be alone......anyways, keep on writin' i really enjoy your poems....

-brittnay-

A peoms that explains my life!! well your an awsome writer keep it up!!

Wow i loved this poem.. so many people have this same feeling and you put this fear into beautiful words.. :)