Comments : Everything you lack

  • very inspirational and creative! well done

  • 19 years ago

    by Rachele

    thank u soooooooo much 4 writing this coz i am in a time of struggle right now and yeh not the happiest ive eva been but thats as it goes ay well this is by far 1 of the best poems ive read 2 day nice work:) 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Jessica K

    U really are amazing. Everything you write its like u can put other peoples feelings and emotions into one simple poem.You've definitly got some major talent .. Keep writing and don't quit.
    Jess xox <3

  • 19 years ago

    by lee

    wow, i liked that poem too.5/5.