Why Do it?

by Dark Savior   Feb 24, 2005


Why did you even bother to do it
why did you have to put me through it
i came home hoping to get your call
five minutes you returned it all.

only to leave a message on my machine
that you had a boyfriend you were sorta seeing
I've had my share of bad woman
just another again, I've my limit

I've had it all, sick of all these relationships
i am sick and feed up, i have my limits
from now on I'm going about alone
I'm sick of it, i should just o.d. on trazadone

i heard what you said, every single word
it hit my heart every dagger you hurled
how can you say those hurtful words
never given a chance in this world

I'm sick of women with all their lies
men have feelings and sometimes we cry....

*This was wrote for a girl who decided to tell me never to call her again over voice mail ten minutes after i had called her and asked her to please call me back this time...she called back knowing i wasn't home...she stringed me along in thoughts of a good wholesome relationship. everyone checked the voice mail too..and heard it all. honestly i am writing this poem crying again...like the weakened idiot i am..i don't care what you rate it...i don't care whatever happens...cause i am sick of crying and tears...shh forget it..how many people give a damn or even read this. *

© 2005 Shaun M.K

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  • 14 years ago

    by Stephanie Michelle

    This is a good poem and I'm sorry you had to go through this. Lots of emotion and good rhythm, just one thing

    "only to leave a message on my machine
    that you had a boyfriend you were sorta seeing
    I've had my share of bad woman
    just another again, I've my limit" --> Here you should add in "had" so the last line says "I've had my limit" rather than i've my limit

    Other than that great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by IML

    Ive had something happen just like this.
    but i wasnt hurt knowing i wasn't the one who missed out on a great person like me.
    i bet you got what it takes as well
    great poems.

    still i wish i had the imagination and mind to write like you can!
    great poem all around

  • 18 years ago

    by littleshadowgirl

    I loved it you are an awsome writer and im sorry for what happen that so suck keep on wrieting *whipes a way your tears and gives you a hug*

    i love you
    bye bye
    10/10

  • 18 years ago

    by Miss Ashley

    Hi Dark Savior!!!
    I just wanted to say thank you for your nice comment on my poem, not many people give me honest feedback like you did...thanks again..and thanks for taking the time to read my poem.
    and i must say..you are a amazing writer...very intresting..and ill be reading more!... never box your talent away..
    Ashley aka Miss Ashley

  • 19 years ago

    by Ana Vidovic

    Aw thats so sad. Well all i can say is that i dont believe women in general suck, its the people we fall in love with that leave us, that dont deserve our time. Just continue to speak from your heart, your poems are great. Read my poem "your novel" its a metaphorical poem about this issue. Ive been used and betrayed but it will never hinder my ability to love or change me as a person. Besides as the saying goes "the one that is worth your tears, would never make you cry". Cheesy i know but hey, its true. You'll love again, we all do. The man im in love with currently was hurt by this girl he loved for 10 years. He thought he would never fall in love again, yet in a month, he fell in love with me. You will find that same love. Dont give up because someone let you down. - 5 great write.

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