i'm so glad to read that you arn't really going to kill yourself! that was a great poem i'm sorry that you have such bad luck with relationships but don't give up...just like everyone else said "there's somone out there for ya!"
xxxChristinaxxx

i did read it, and you are not weak at all... it takes alot to think on such a subject and write how you feel... some people block it out and try to go on with it boddled inside... you wrote out how you felt incredably... i know exactly how you feel... besides being broke up with on voicemail (i dont have voicemail.) but i know how you mean you hate being the one whos hurt... and it always seems to happen with the same women/guys....
your an incredable writer... honestly... 5/5

I care to read it mate ! it was good for you to speack out about it ! n great for you that u recorded that in this poem ! i liked it really.

Peace,
Darla

it is so sad but beautifully wriitten. Hold on life will ge better.

lot's of love and hugs
Noziyna

very good poem. I don't think there's anything I can say to make you feel better. These people said it all. But here's a comforting thought. You will find a girl who loves everything about you. you will be her entire world, and she will never leave you. She will love you until the day she dies. And that other *itch? She will pull the same crap on the love of her life, and he will leave her. She will die an lonely old woman, and her last thoughts will be of how sweet and kind you were. Excellent poem. 5/5. Just don't close your heart to love, becuase the love of your life could pass you by that way. Good luck!

im sorry she did it to you. but you are such a sweet guy that im sure you will find the perfect girl for you that wont break your heart. good poem
stay strong always

i had a friend who's boyfriend did that... then he would call and threaten her not to find another b/f good poem

If you spend word for word with me, I shall make your wit bankrupt...

Congratulations! You have just proved the theory that there is no limit to human stupidity. Your post is an orgy of stultifying cacophonous verbal depravity; an exercise in literary impotence, and an offense to all of good taste and decency.

I don't know what makes you such a worthless poster, but it really works! Why is it that the people with the smallest minds always have the biggest mouths? Have you ever noticed that whenever you sit behind a keyboard, some idiot starts typing? To quote Thomas Brackett Reed: "They never open their mouths without subtracting from the sum of human knowledge."

What possessed you to think that you were capable of being entertaining or interesting to read? Looking at you, Darwin would NOT be pleased to see how inefficiently evolution sometimes works. Maybe you wouldn't be such a Jerk-In-The-Box if you weren't so stupid that even single-celled organisms out score you in IQ tests; if your weren't so fat that a "Place Your Billboard Ad Here" is printed on each of your butt cheeks, or if you didn't have a face that people rub tree branches on to make ugly sticks. Who am I kidding? You would.

What a pathetic story...well, it suits a pathetic person so I'm not surprised...I feel sorry (wasting my time) for reading this

this is a great poem and it is well very true but you should never think that people don't care cause alot of people do and i use to think people didn't care and if you look at my peoms you would understand what mistake i did when i thought that but now i know people do care and i've stopped not all girls are liers and you'll find your someone stay strong 5/5 xoxox jennifer

Now that is some true emotion shown there...amazing job especially for having written through tears...sorry....you'll meet a woman who won't lie to you and make you cry like that....

xxx

awe, how sad. Iknow thats now what you want to here. the poem is very well written, and makes your point well. I'm sorry you keep meating the wrong girl, but one will come along sometime.

~Breeze

Aw thats so sad. Well all i can say is that i dont believe women in general suck, its the people we fall in love with that leave us, that dont deserve our time. Just continue to speak from your heart, your poems are great. Read my poem "your novel" its a metaphorical poem about this issue. Ive been used and betrayed but it will never hinder my ability to love or change me as a person. Besides as the saying goes "the one that is worth your tears, would never make you cry". Cheesy i know but hey, its true. You'll love again, we all do. The man im in love with currently was hurt by this girl he loved for 10 years. He thought he would never fall in love again, yet in a month, he fell in love with me. You will find that same love. Dont give up because someone let you down. - 5 great write.

Hi Dark Savior!!!
I just wanted to say thank you for your nice comment on my poem, not many people give me honest feedback like you did...thanks again..and thanks for taking the time to read my poem.
and i must say..you are a amazing writer...very intresting..and ill be reading more!... never box your talent away..
Ashley aka Miss Ashley

I loved it you are an awsome writer and im sorry for what happen that so suck keep on wrieting *whipes a way your tears and gives you a hug*

i love you
bye bye
10/10

Ive had something happen just like this.
but i wasnt hurt knowing i wasn't the one who missed out on a great person like me.
i bet you got what it takes as well
great poems.

still i wish i had the imagination and mind to write like you can!
great poem all around

This is a good poem and I'm sorry you had to go through this. Lots of emotion and good rhythm, just one thing

"only to leave a message on my machine
that you had a boyfriend you were sorta seeing
I've had my share of bad woman
just another again, I've my limit" --> Here you should add in "had" so the last line says "I've had my limit" rather than i've my limit

Other than that great job!