hey, loved the poem! it's really amazing. just wondering is the poem true? anyways keep up the writing! |
by stephalee
really good i know wat its like 2 cut and wonder if you cut any deeper will you die or not really good poem thou |
by Twisted Fate
dude, rock on.. |
i loved it! it's deep, sad, yet beautiful. a definite 5! keep up the great work. |
by Trevor
thanks guys for all the great comments! and yeah a lot of the stuff i write about is real stuff |
by Danielle
Hey Trevor! Thank you so much for your comment. I really appreciate it! And you write so beautifully. I rarely find poems where they don't rhyme anymore, and those ones are sometimes my favorites. Keep writing, Becasue I can't wait to read more. And I really hope that you check out more of mine. I have a bunch! But it'd be awesome i you read them anyways! :) :) :) Thanks again! Off to read more now :) |