yeah pretty good i felt the pain ...so sad but well written nice work!
>>5/5<<
bec xXx

full of emotion,and felt yer pain,thats all you can do is write from the heart,at least its full meaning.no like some crap you get on this site.5/5

Great poem! 5/5!

U are very good thanks for reading mine I don't hold a candle to u! U have what it takes!

Realy good had a nice flow and alot of emotion wich is important for a great poem.

i love it i can soooo relate

wow your heart has some amazing words in it that can touch everyone's hearts

This is a great poem hun. Keep it up!

Love,
Tiff

that's a pretty good poem. lots of emotion. great job

that's a pretty good poem. lots of emotion. great job

Thanx for the comment
It really put a smile upon my face =)
Great poem you've got here.
5 stars for a star.. *smile*

Excellent job, your style is similar to mine when I write freestyle-5/5

It really does sound like u wrote the poem from your heart, I have to say you did a really good job. Nice work!

Aww the pain from a broken heart .... been there once and still feel the pain and times.

For some reason there is no pain except death that will come close to the pain from your heart being broke.

Great job putting in all in words.

Sher

hope that pain will heal soon