awww, this is a wonderful poem marta! i really like it!

Wow, this is a really good poem, I really love it, keep up the good work, check out mine if you get the chance, take care =) xx

I love it! Very touching! Love yer rhymin too! You have great talent! Keep it up!

Luye

5/5 Indeed

great poem a lot of great words used keep it up 5/5 indeed! coment on mine too please bye

this is really deep... sad but deep... also well writen..kepp up the great work..xox Sherrie

that was an amazing well written poem, the rhymes were great and there was so much emotion, keep it up xxx

THIS POEM WAS VERY DEEP, I LOVED IT...5/5
MUCH LOVE
~*~HEATHER~*~

The rhyming and flow in this poem was extremley exquisit! This was just so magically written, take care always <3

Luffuuls Yew :)
;;-- Kalah

Marta,

I felt so much from this poem. PLease never let it get you down that much. I know how you feel but don't EVER go that far, please!! Love ya gurl, and much love--
~Kerri anne~

Perfect flow another exellent poem! I don't think I have read any of ur poems before! I have been missing out! I loved it! Brooke

WOAH!! so powerful!!! It gave me chills! it really did!...You were and will always be my favorite poet!...I wrote you a long time ago!..but you never wrote back..I'm starting to worry...I just hope this poem isn't true...I hope your okay!..please let me know...just write to say your okay at least...because I'm super worried.
Take Care and remember...people love you.

This poem is so powerfull and mature i loved it good job this is like one of my favorate poems i love your writting and i hope you get better im in the same place with depression and stuff only its cutting great job 5/5 keep writting check out some of mine if you want

Hey,this was nice.
I only freaked out because I thought it was true and you were going to die/commit suicide.
But other than that, it was very deep, and heart-wrenching, which I think it was supposed to be.