The sun never stops shinig it's rays (rinka ) on our beautiful earth... and when i am with you it is always just rising over the hills. As i lay in your arms it is never dark for i can see the moon shining in your eyes. ;)

The warmth and light in my heart never dies. it burns and is kept lit and happy by your glory, prayer, and love.

My story never ends because darkness never reaches my heart.

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* hmmmm nice. I like it... is this for any one special?
hmmm i wonder.... this anticipation is kiling me (Sat). hmm who could this person be?

whoever she is... she must have one hell of a guy to love her ;)

btw i lost count after one.
;)

neo this is a great poem but it sounds like something that i have heard before i will email it too u. u r awsome thooght you should know that
luv you hun
~giggles~

well ya giggles the first line is not mine, it was for a class dat my sister is taking and she had been given the first line and had to make up the rest so i made it for her, i guess dats y u have seen this before. but ne thing except the first line is all mine and no one else's.

i like it... im not a big fan of love poems, but i enjoyed reading it. good job

Very nice....keep it up

Aww how cute