To sarah

by TheGayPimp   Feb 24, 2005


When we was together you made my

heart pound.when we was apart i felt

like i had been knocked down.i always

wanted you with me and you was no

matter how much i did wrong you held

your ground you was strong. when we

finally fell apart it felt like someone

stabbed me in my heart. but now i

think we can honestly say now there

are better days. your finally falling in

love girl your a shining star don't let

no one hurt you no matter who they

are. just keep in mind i think of you

from time to time. some days i wish i

could go back but now i see you happy

so i guess ill take that back. so I'm

telling you i wish you the best good

luck girl your better than the rest!

before i go i need to mention one

more thing i cared about you i just was

a messed up person and I'm sorry you

never did anything OK.-Becca-

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  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    A very nce written poem...
    but well i aint tying to be mean or anything... but i found a lil mistake in the word... umm...

    "When we was together you made my
    heart pound.when we was apart i felt
    like i had been knocked down."

    should be...

    "When we were together you made my
    heart pound.when we were apart i felt like i had been knocked down."

    overall i loved the poem 5/5
    keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by TheGayPimp

    good poem matt i love ya thanks 4 helpin me out

  • 19 years ago

    by TheGayPimp

    becca ur cousin

  • 19 years ago

    by Red Charm

    ok is this the becca as in my cousin or just some other crazy person? its good though. -britt-

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah Ashley

    Good Poem but it shold be we were not we was. Cheak out some of my poems :) bye xox

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