HMmmmmm very good a little too good Hmmmmmmmmm ur getting 2 good at poetry stop it b 4 u get 2 far ahead of me :@ he he he :P gr8 work

This was REALY good i loved it

that was really good!! i will vote and comment again after it is finished!! great poem so far!! :)

great poem!!!

Wow, Sad but very creative!! Awesome Work, -5/5- Keep it up! I loved it, girl! God Bless You!

-Sedusha-

i like this... great work...xox sherrie

yeah that was really really good!! great job!! keep it up!! :)

Really good, I love it keep writing, Take care xx

i like it!! i'm glad you added on to it, excellent poem! i like the sad emotion you put in the writing, its great and i can relate to it.

yes I wrote it =) Thanx for your nice comments and for your votes..

Hugs from September

wow i think this is one of ur best poems thus far i havent read the others yet will do but this one really glowed! take care.

that was soo0o sad, r u ok??? memba hun i am always here

mascara running
as i cry black tinted drops
two toned blush
depression never stops

that was my favourite part, your a really good writer, 5/5, keep it up, i added you to my favourites too so keep writing, i will keep reading!

Luv Always
*Lucy*

I Can Relate Good Job On This 1 What More Can I Say Than 5.0 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Astonishing! Truly unique...black tears. wow. It's absolutely perfect. The imagery, the flow, the honesty...and I relate once again....thank you. this is my fave so far. I love it.

xxx