by Andrea
wonderful poem!! i really like it! hehe, its kinda funnie cuz i just wrote a poem called second chance...but this is really good! :) |
by !*!Zoe!*!
Oh....I like this poem, but I would put it in the Poems about Life in the inspirational category. Anyway, it was a great poem. |
by elise
Awsome poem. I really think that it was quite touching. |
omg! this poem rocks soo hard. i love it!!! gosh! great job!!! |
Loved It xoxo-Nikki-xoxo |
by *Sherrie*
and place the knife against me throat ...me should be my... but other than that one mistake this poem is great...xox Sherrie |
by Shawn
nice change of events at the end.. a poem i can relate to... somewhat, cool poem'd |
by Marianne
Loved It!!:) I loved the happy ending!:) |
by Amber
Wow, this poem gave me chills, and almost brought tears to my eyes, because not only do i understand whut your are writting about, i also have felt the same way you have, and expreined it to. Very good job, i loved it. |
by shenoa
i love the ending... continuing to love me, even without the mask... i love it.. i love that line... great job... 5/5 |
by Kristen
Wow... that was a great poem, keep it up. |
by Chantley
You know, I thought I had a friend like that. But I lost her to a guy. So I guess if I did the same thing. I probably would've died. :( |
by Jess
great job i loved it keep it up!! |
by lost soul
that was really good and sad! |
by Joann
omfg!!! i loved this!! i wish this would happen to me!! man but anyways this was nicely written!! 5/5 ♥ Joann |
by Pianist
very good poem! I loved it! If only we all could have a second chance. Vote and comment on some of my stuff if you ever get the chance. |
this type of story has been around for a long time but i just wrote my version of it, especially since there are many versions i figured why not |