by katie! Feb 24, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
This time the cut is too deep |
Theres alot in here that you could really do without, its really long and drawn out, i think u really wernt sure what u were writing about and u just let it come out, which is fine, but in this case, it just makes it a mess... but once twards the end it does come together, very nice job. :) *** also, i hope ur feeling better... keep up your strength, i am too fighting the same fight. |
It hurt to read but I couldn't stop. |
by crystal
Wow, great poem! there was a few parts that didn't quite rhyme and it messed up the flow a little but you did a great job. |
by M MEM
Woah this is really long, but its also really good. i like it very much, especially this part |
you had me from the start. good job. your words pulled me into them. the feelings were so true. your poem made me feel like i was back there. feeling the pain. good job. really. |