great poem, very nicely and deeply written, that was def. a powerful piece keep up the good work

this is reli movin. i hope its nt based on personal xperience bt frm the powerful way its written i guess it is. stay strong loadsa lv xxx

Hey this is amazing! ur very talented and i can tell ur feelings in this one! Keep it up :)

Really powerful poem... did that really happen? I hope you're okay.. you have amazing talent. I thought with a poem that long it wouldn't be worth reading.. but I was most definitely proved wrong!! I loved it.. 5/5 from me.. and I really hope you're okay : (
XoxoX
Robin

Oh my gosh! Like when I finished this poem, I was just speechless! This is amazing. I know you have 37 other comments, and you may never read this, but it's absolutely breathtaking. Keep up the excellent poems, I look forward to reading more of them.
Luv always, KT

That is such a good poem! The only realy problem I found was "Seeing me become depression" I think maybe you mean Seeing me fall into depression...

you had me from the start. good job. your words pulled me into them. the feelings were so true. your poem made me feel like i was back there. feeling the pain. good job. really.

Woah this is really long, but its also really good. i like it very much, especially this part
Hearing footsteps on the ground
Watching myself being found
Teachers run into the loo
Dazed and frightened and confused

those words are very powerful 5/5

Wow, great poem! there was a few parts that didn't quite rhyme and it messed up the flow a little but you did a great job.
crystal

It hurt to read but I couldn't stop.

Theres alot in here that you could really do without, its really long and drawn out, i think u really wernt sure what u were writing about and u just let it come out, which is fine, but in this case, it just makes it a mess... but once twards the end it does come together, very nice job. :) *** also, i hope ur feeling better... keep up your strength, i am too fighting the same fight.