I really love this poem, you did a great job luv. I would have gave you 100 out of 100 if i could.

Good poem. You are a good writer=)

This one was good too! One suggestion though. In some parts you have words that don't necessarily have to be there, words like "there" or something. Take those out and it would make the flow a lot better. I can't exactly remember which parts they were in. Keep writing, I enjoy your poems.
Satuxxa

Very nice poem.I really liked it.