wow this is soo good!!! u r an amazing writer this is such a good poem with such a good message omg u r soo good keep it up!!!
rock on!

Wow what a great poem! and what a great point! if this is tru im so sorry this happened. But what a grea poem! keep up the good work! <3

wow such a touching story set into poem you've captured reality so well

very meaningful, i wish people would learn race and color mean nothing!

Amy, i dont think ive ever seen a finer work of art in all my time. Your soul sings with sorrow, you capture every emotion possible. The final thing I have to say is, I'm really sorry I hurt you so much. I know I always do something stupid or wrong, or even something like this poem. I know your always afraid of me getting hurt, and I know that your worried about our future. Amy, love you so much!

I hate racism too >.

Oh my goodness. That brought me to tears. I loved it. Wow. That was really really good. Keep it up.