Comments : You get hurt

  • 19 years ago

    by Minkus

    Great job, just one suggestion, perhaps make the poem a little bit longer, but not if you don't want to, it's great anyways

  • 19 years ago

    by Marta

    it was pretty good, a stressful situation if i was there, but great work x x x x

  • 19 years ago

    by Rashelle

    Thats was pretty go something that we all have gone threw