wonderful poem!! this is very touching, i love it!!

Nice poem Heather, you really write good poetry. check out some of mine please thanks, take care

great poem heather. that last sentence is very true.
great job.

Shannon

chick...keep writing, you're good at it. rock on!

Heather, beautiful poem that touched my heart. Great job, hugs to you, lol Ann

Seemed more like a prayer then a poem. But all in all...wow once again, i know your not your typical 16 year old. Your poems are way too advanced for your age level, you should become a writer or a poet for sure heather dear.

Five/Five

P.S. Thank you for your comment and email...i now not all girls/woman are like that, but it seems the ones i meet are anyways..maybe i am the one to blame i don't know, but either way. Great Job

Five/Five

Great one.Nicely Written...

Chris

I liked this entire poem, but that last line is poetic brilliance! Very insightful! Keep up the amazing work~Holly

Hey Heather

i read ur writing,n love it as a prayer ,which is cool(Prayer in a shape of poem) thats nice indeed.

ur last 2 lines where amazing,so deep n true,u were right about those people who love God a little,coz its them who really need god to get into their life n bright it up for them !

Nice one and nice ideas :)

Peace-Always-
Darla