For a Broken Soul

by Leah20   Feb 25, 2005


I can hear you crying
And you won't tell me why
I can see that you're dying
Slowly inside
So badly I want to help you
But you won't let me in
So badly I want you to pull through
But you don't know where to begin
There is beauty all around
In everything you see
It just needs to be found
And for you to believe
In time, all things will heal
In time, more will be revealed

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  • 19 years ago

    by Nici

    This topic is something that I feel; most people can relate to on one level or another, and so becomes more appealing as a poem. Short and to the point.

    Keep Writing
    Nici

  • 19 years ago

    by Ria

    Very nice and optimistic,I wish it could be a bit longer

  • 19 years ago

    by Hina

    This is a semi decent poem. Although it lacks imagery, it has potential. Keep writing Leah..and good luck in the future!
    ~Hina

  • 19 years ago

    by Samantha

    I don't understand the less than perfect rating for this poem...Perhaps, because the meaning is not crystal clear, some people would find problems...But anything less than 4.5 is outrageous.

    lol...Sorry, I really like this poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    nice poem although i thought it ended too soon lol i was gettin into it and then it stopped :) hope ur okay and will return the favour great poem!
    xxxLoUxxx take care!

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