good I liked it short but good. Take care

This has been written really well and I really like it. Good Job. Keep writing. Love Emma xxx

Sorry forgot to mention 5/5. Love Emma xxx

I really reallly like this one!
XOXO
Forgotten

nice poem although i thought it ended too soon lol i was gettin into it and then it stopped :) hope ur okay and will return the favour great poem!
xxxLoUxxx take care!

I don't understand the less than perfect rating for this poem...Perhaps, because the meaning is not crystal clear, some people would find problems...But anything less than 4.5 is outrageous.

lol...Sorry, I really like this poem.

This is a semi decent poem. Although it lacks imagery, it has potential. Keep writing Leah..and good luck in the future!
~Hina

Very nice and optimistic,I wish it could be a bit longer

This topic is something that I feel; most people can relate to on one level or another, and so becomes more appealing as a poem. Short and to the point.

Keep Writing
Nici