I Tried....

by Leah20   Feb 25, 2005


I tried to write a poem
To explain all the reasons I love you
But I could never find the right words
And I gave up half way through

I tried to find the right words
But they always came out wrong
Nothing seemed to flow right
The words didn't belong

Time and time again I wrote
But no matter how hard i tried
Nothing came out right
And I didn't know why

But after much analyzation
I found this fact to be true
there are no words in the world to describe
All the beauty that lies within you

So as I fail yet again
To convey the way I feel about you with my words
I hope that you understand
Everything that you've heard

Simply put
After all that we've been through
I just had to take this chance to say
I really do love you

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  • 19 years ago

    by mysterious

    very sweet....be strong and hold on....life isn't worth living without love :-)

  • 19 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    awww so sweet and so true. really nice poem well done!!! take care
    xxxLoUxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Yet another excellent poem. I really like the honesty and unique way you addressed the situation; it isn't the everyday, run-of-the-mill "I love you so much I!" love poem. It really stands out as being an inner-conflict. Great job.
    ~God Bless~
    -Kate

  • 19 years ago

    by Sonya

    Aw, its really cute. Its a really good poem, keep it up!!
    x3me

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Really sweet love poem, it is very beautiful!!! Keep witing, you have talent!!!