What the Hell?

Wow wonderful poem. Its written so well. Your flow and rhytm were great! This poem was so sad yet so truthful. I really liked the lines:

"Why the hell did you do that
Always reaching for the knife
Can't you think of a better way
It won't always be there to mend your life"

Its completely true what you wrote, their are always better ways then turning to the knife. Anyways Keep up the awesome work! Your a very talented writer! Bye!
~Luvz~
~Angie~
xoxo

Great poem and i can't understand your frustration becoz i was one of those people you talk about in your poem however you made me feel your frustration in this poem....I lOvEd It!!!

Great job Leah! I have read a lot of your poems in the past, you are such a good writer...but I guess that's why you are in my favorites lol..Great write anyhow, keep it up

It's not easy for poeple who don't do those thing to them self, to understand them who does!!! I'm one of them and I can totally understand your frustration, but please understand how hard it is to not give in with this addiction!!! It's so hard to live, when you just want to die....Anyway, I really liked the poem! =0)

its really good i can turly relate. just luv it. wonderful poem.o and i know i am not that good thats why i need all the help i can. so how do you get ryhming plan?