I love this poem! good job! keep up the good work 5/5

I loved it too. I don't usually give out praise like that, so i'd bask in it if I were you!

I especially liked the repitition, not just of specific lines, but of the general format of the poem. The use of rhyming definitely added to the repititious feel without getting too overbearing.

Very touching, very cool. Good work.

Good reading you have potential to become even better really well written and formatted keep it up xx

thats a great poem. welkl done!

Jemma

luv it. wonderful poem. its great. dont ever stop writtiNG. i luv Your stuff. :)

thank u 4 da comment ill keep ur tip in mind

i love it !!!!!!!!!!

I really like this poem a lot...
Very well-written.. keep it up!
5/5.
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that was a great poem, ur really talented, good job, please rate and comment my poems 2, thanx

At first as I read this poem, it didn't really appeal that much to me. I thought it was too simple and not as orginal as it could've been. But after I finished it, I find it very heartfelt and almost touching. The repitition was okay, effective in the first few stanzas, but I thought it got a off track at the last stanza, where the pattern breaks suddenly. Of course, it's an important message - "Don't ever give up hope!", but as a poem in whole I think it almost collides with the rest of the poem. How about.. "Which ever paths you may choose in life"... "Don't ever give up hope in life!" , and remove the repitition of "just know that".

Whatever you do, I'm sure it will turn out great.

Great poem , well done
Doreen

aww that is so sweet your friend is lucky to have you! this one really touched me too...you definately have talent keep it up!
xxxChristinaxxx

great poem, love the repitition iots rly affective keep it up xxxxx

I love the whole idea of the poem, the repitition!!! Who did you write this to, a friend??? Good job, nice one!!!

You want to be my friend ? with this poem I take you.. 5/5 great job