by christina
WOW i loved it ..... sooo true wow i dont know wat to say great work ur mum wrote it greatly thats my second favourite poem good work.....5/5 |
OMG this was a wonderful poem to whoever wrote this i write a lot to knowing about rape and many other things, this is so wonderful i give it 5 out of 5 |
by stephalee
wow this is an AMAZING poem its really good im giving this a 5! |
that was a very touching yet well read piece. Keep it up. |
by Sammy
Oh, if that really happened to you, i am so sorry!!! that is so bad. guys like that shouldnt be allowed to live.... |
that is so sad! good poem |
by Just Val
wow, so good, i liked it, it made me cry. 5/5 |
by Megin
hey i know what being raped feels like! and the only thing i can say about this poem is EVERYTHING IS TRUE in it..and it was awesome..it gave me the chills when i started reading it and my eyes started to get teary..it was really good 5/5!! |
by natalie
thats so beautiful, in a sad way :( |
by Hailey
Thanks Everyone..Ill Pass On All Thse Touching Messages To My Mum...And I Believe I Did Inherit My Writting From My Mum..Someday I Hope To Write An Ounce As Good As Her..She Wrote This For Me And In A Rare Moment I Saw How Much My Mum Really Cared For Me..And How Broken She Is As Well..No-One Should Have To Watch Their Baby Girl Be Destroyed..Rape Dosent Just Affect The Victim..It Affects The Families As well..My Family Still Breathes It And Lives It EveryDay..But Wer Stay Strong As A Family |
This poem is so sad and so great. It made me cry. I am so sorry this is true... I can't believe your mother wrote a poem for you, that is so beautiful! |
i absolutely loved this poem, its so sad, I've never been victim to such a thing but I can only imagine how you all must feel :*( your mom is a wonderful writer! God bless you-5 |
by Heather
it's so sad to read, i could see it happening in my mind as i was reading(and trust me gurl, it wasn't pretty.) great poem and keep writing. |
that was a wonderful poem. just bueatiful poem. i am so sorry that you had to go through it. but you did a nice job with the job. |
Omg this is a beautiful poem, it made me cry, yu r so lucky 2 have a mum hu loves u this much, im sorry 4 what happened |