by Heather Clark Feb 25, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
As the days continue to pass |
by Dark Kitten
Lovely poem. Well-written. No mistakes that I could see. 5/5 |
by Carmen
That was really sad. i understand it, i have the same situation. but, you need to place commas and periods in there to seperate your thoughts, because its kinda hard to read. 4/5 |
by Danielle
I felt it was very strong and emotional you're really good |
by Lisa
Such a sad poem,but I understand your feelings completely, I like the way you put feeling into the poem, although it does make me sad, lol.. |
it's short of short but i liked reading it, you explain the feeling in this poem very well |