A prayer for my friend

Before i lay me down to sleep
i have a promise to the lord i must keep.
so every night i pray
that My best friend and i are best friends to stay.
i ask him to keep her well
and not to let her go through hell.
her soul is pure
and her heartbreak needs a cure.
i pray that she'll be safe and strong
and will believe in herself not to do wrong.
i ask that she lives her age times 10
and is forgiven if she shall sin.
she feels so weak and wants to give up
lord i pray make her keep her head up.
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**it is dedicated to my bestfriend(obviously)