The tear uncovered

by Hot_Trav_lover   Feb 25, 2005


Your the tear in my eye
showing that you are a big lie
I cant be with you
or with out you too
i am scared of the way you treat me
the pain I have to see
but if you touch me i will hurt you
no one knew
just because i am an easy play mate
does not mean i am your bait
just go away please and never come back
get going on the right track

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  • 19 years ago

    by lakitu

    i'm not sure, i think its good but i think you tried a little to hard to make it rhyme. but well done.

  • 19 years ago

    by unprotected lover

    ok fist off when i read this poem, i didnt see alot of emotion try to make them longer add description on why you feel the way you do, does that make you feel better

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