wow, its really good, you get a message across with out axtually saying whayt it was, and i think you have to be really talented to do that. and thanks for commenting on my poem!

Man this is real deep... your a good writer your girlfriend was right you are a good writer... keep up the great writing...xox Sherrie

Excellent the only word i know for it

I wrote this poem because I have a side of me that I would rather keep locked inside, we all have our own monsters!

Very, very, very, very, very, very true! lol! Everyone on here rights about how they either cut themselves or how they get mad at people so easily, but that's sort of the same as releasing their inner being, or monster. Great poem Josh!

IgnorantAngel
~Sierra

writes* lol....bad grammar sucks!!!