WOW! I can really relate to this, thanx heaps, plz vote/ comment on my poems, love to hear wat u think.
I live In Australia btw
Lol cheers
Kira

i can really relate to this one exept i'm not quite that brave...really well written nice job
xxxChristinaxxx

luv it. wonderfull poem

U write what is real. I had a firend who went through the same. Ur work is great because it is 4 real

Hey there! Personally I don't like the idea of suicide of cutting, but it doesn't mean i don't like this poem. I thought it was pretty good. I think the flow needs a bit or work though, because its a bit awkward in some parts. But that's okay, over all i liked this poem, 4/5, keep on writing.
SatuzKa

I know exactly how you feel. Once you cut it basically takes over your life and you need it so you can't stop. It has been 11 days since I last cut and it is so hard. I want to but I can't. Anyway, great poem. Keep in touch hun! :) And check out some of my poems.

Love,
Tiff

Never the right choice however you express yur feelings well honey xxx

amazing poem keep it up

Great poem hun! This sends out such a strong feeling and its sad yet beautiful! Keep it up, you have a lot of talent!
Love alwayz....
Haily
XOXOXOXOX

I thought It was a sad poem but i can see what you mean - chocolate is an addiction just like drinking. Yes it would be hard to stop cutting if it was done often enough. Anyway Please try and stop hun if this is about you. :)

sad...but really good..loved it so much

I do sincerely hope that in the last few lines you are playing "devil's advocate" and nothing more, if you truly condone suicide then this poem is sad in a far deeper sense than depression. You always have God Madam...always.

i like it. i know how you feel.
Emma

DEEP OR WAT?
i dont cut. jst ova stuff so i cant reali rel8 but its a gd poem. its flows ova ur tongue well. it has loadsa emotion u can tell its not jst a half hearted poem its from inside, u can tell from de lyrics. gd one. sad cna sometimes b beautiful. so if u prefer writin sad poems. u go wiv it. b original