Every Wish

by Ashley   Feb 26, 2005


Ever wish on my knees
Every daffodil floating in the breeze
Every shooting star in the sky
Every lash from my eye
Every candle on my cake
Every wishbone I can break
Every time I had my fingers crossed
Every penny that I tossed
Every wish that didn't come true
'cuz I'm still not here with you

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  • 19 years ago

    by Nici

    Another well written poem where the words seemed to flow together. I think to say that I enjoyed reading this poem would be inappropriate when taking into account the topic. However the repitition worked well.

    Keep writing,
    Nici

  • 19 years ago

    by Mandy

    I LUBBB ITTTT<3 excellent moo!!!

    5.0

  • 19 years ago

    by *~*Soldier Lover*~*

    wow....short but the end is really powerful.
    Every wish that didn't come true
    'cuz I'm still not here with you

    so powerful. 5/5
    *~*Soldier Lover*~*

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    Wow, short but sweet right, I really liked the way that flowed, cool, 5, keep it up

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