by Noelle k. Feb 26, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
This is a song I made up its still in the progress so bare with me... |
very well written!!! you've got a lot of talent. |
I don't like the way you put it together as in one big paragraph, you should try stanza form hun, it would get more reads, I'm sure....however, I do like this one better and tears are never weak, whoever says that is completly oblivious in the nicest terms possible...tears are beautiful so never be afraid to shed em! -5 |
by Solace
Full of emotion.. Very nice.. 5/5 |
by Dark Savior
It has the making to be a great poem if you would put it into the format of one for sure. |
by Bredada
I loved your song i gave it a 5 i noe how it feels xcept da cuttin but i cant realte with the hiddden tears |