I loved your song i gave it a 5 i noe how it feels xcept da cuttin but i cant realte with the hiddden tears

It has the making to be a great poem if you would put it into the format of one for sure.

Five/Five

P.S. Thank you for your kind comments on my poems. i always return the favor, good or bad.

Full of emotion.. Very nice.. 5/5

*> : PainOfOne

I don't like the way you put it together as in one big paragraph, you should try stanza form hun, it would get more reads, I'm sure....however, I do like this one better and tears are never weak, whoever says that is completly oblivious in the nicest terms possible...tears are beautiful so never be afraid to shed em! -5

with love,
Heather.

very well written!!! you've got a lot of talent.
Ariane
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